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How do you get useful feedback on a draft?
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Ask a specific question, and ask the reader to state the main contribution in one sentence. If they cannot, the draft is not communicating it, whatever the quality of the prose.
Reading an answer is not being able to give one. The section that teaches this is Revising, reviewing and responding, 4 hours of Writing & communication.
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